maybe you should try using your right hand?
pretty good drawing anyways.
That was incredible...
Is it wrong to actually be satisfied by an ending like that? That guy was REALLY annoying.
great job man.
You have some talent, and i really liked the unpolished style...
. the drawing
. the ambient sounds of the water
Couple things i would change:
. Come up with a story- give me a reason to watch, keep watching and want to watch future movies by you.
. If you dont come up with a story- you had better be showcasing some REALLY badass art.
. Make more realistic sound effects or add music- when the tiger pounces into the water, the splash doesnt really reflect a realistic sound. and what was that sound when the moths comes into view? i thought it was going to be music, but it was really choppy.
you had good colors and i enjoyed watching this animation. nothing too new or amazing about it, but solid.
Thanks for the shoutout too.
The Good and the Bad
-perspective layout of the tablet is a very cool and interesting effect
-the black paint splatters on the sides look awesome
-the actual graphics of the headphones and the speakers at the bottom (separately, see below)
-the choice of font for the header title (Weltron Urban, I think)
-the yellow and blue paint splatters do not go in terms of color
-the shadow of the title font does not work
-the four section titles do not POP at all. they are really flat. the dropshadows you used does not fit with the angle.
-the style of the speakers at the bottom do not fit with the style of the headphones. also the lightning flashes coming out of the speakers do not fit with the overall style.
All in all, it does not really work together, though you do have a lot of elements that would work really well if you stuck with one style throughout. Keep it up and you will keep getting better and better.
Hope this helps.
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